Tuesday, October 8, 2013

Jim Shankle

Jim Shankle,

What do you think about this wording for that "join" message?
I'm going to propose an official change to itnd would appreciate your input.

"This link becomes active 30 minutes prior to a scheduled BUSINESS HANGOUTS MEETING. Either the link is not yet active or the meeting is over. There is no active meeting at this time. Please contact your host for more information if you think this is an error."

Andy

2 comments:

  1. Andy

    Realize that I would rewrite Shakespeare so always expect edits when you send me something to proof read! As CS Lewis says, "Just take what you want and leave the rest"....You won't hurt my feelings if you accept none of them.


    "The link you have entered will become active 30 minutes prior to the time scheduled for this BUSINESS HANGOUTS MEETING.

    If you are seeing this message, it is because either:
    1- The link is not yet active because the meeting has not started, or
    2- The meeting is over.

    Please contact your host if you think you are receiving this message in error or for more information."

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  2. Jim Shankle

    That works too!
    I'll be sending your version and ask Darius to consider changing it.

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